- look at the previous post
- how does writing affect the body of the woman?  does she get pregnant with/abort it?  is it menstrual? does it hunch/cripple her, make her winged/gilled?  has she spells?
- the difference between 'doing' and 'describing doing': where's your resonance?  Audience experience?  Something you read?  Something they read?  Sensory/Visual/Mental/Emotional?
- Be in the space of frustration.  Does your voice change?  Could you write lists?  How can you disrupt it?  Can you trip yourself?
- Please pick me up and follow my instructions.  My arm labelled, face covered.
- Compose, choreograph, make.  Affect.  The President's Office.  Who came out the door?  What did he say?  
- The marks of dissection.  Feeling the bones inside our bodies/drawing texts/diagrams/labels.  Give actors half a script.  The journey from donating to the blessing of the remains.

rather than explanation, as
[glimpse]
rather than linearity, a
men's lifestyle magazine featuring Beyonce 
clothed in
words, a dancer
in heaps
of text recalls the earlier exploration
of text and image, the 'thirties, 

Red-haired women is another one, isn't it?
Did you come from Cork?
I don't understand - where's the 'we'?
It'd be very funny if that girl's name was Teresa.
I got a really weird text today from the guy who bought
my parents' house,
and it has a bath and a bidet and everything...I could have done all
sorts of things!

I'm going to have to say Cyclops, but
the constitution wasn't until 1910 - or 1937.
Scintillating scotoma!  That's way better than mine!
Alright, just tell me if they're acting up
but where is Princess Barbie on it?
Oh no really?  Oh really, that's very annoying.
Let me just cut in here, can I - 
Get your coat off, I can't believe you.

It's a sign for Women on Waves
with its top scratched off
on a branch in UCC
the trees are under and over
the two giant redwoods nowhere
to be seen - they are stunted maybe
there were rips in the blasted cliffs
where a person could climb to the top
to the hallowed Aula Maxima after dark
when they shut the gates - and at the gates
four white swans
necks dripping like bass tones into the deep.

- find similar!

1. is like a line of poetry
2. is like the x-files
3. is the discovery of Tutankhamun's tomb Nov 26 1922
- another cylindrical piece: lit inside projects its text onto ground, bodies...In a shopping centre.  The materiality of text.

I know but I just.
The audience learned
the setting up and the disruption of patterns
   (shapes of things that you are using in a new way),
the reverse of checking the text beside an artwork.

I should have called him Mark!
What would have happened next.

The contrasts between the location and the text.
The audience could let go, be a child, because of the contrivance.
I didn't tell them what to do, I crafted a space
to be discovered.  The rude/
naughtiness in location (Chaplaincy hedge)
adds to the pleasure.

Smelling breaks down barriers, 
as does bending, touching

- an outside narrator initially, became inner kind of
(they were all smelling the lemon at the end).