The audience learned
the setting up and the disruption of patterns
(shapes of things that you are using in a new way),
the reverse of checking the text beside an artwork.
I should have called him Mark!
What would have happened next.
The contrasts between the location and the text.
The audience could let go, be a child, because of the contrivance.
I didn't tell them what to do, I crafted a space
to be discovered. The rude/
naughtiness in location (Chaplaincy hedge)
adds to the pleasure.
Smelling breaks down barriers,
as does bending, touching
- an outside narrator initially, became inner kind of
(they were all smelling the lemon at the end).